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When I just read the beginning part of story and saw the Tiger's personality, I thought it would be a cliche story but turns out that It's super cute and well-writen! Really loved the cute characters and story writing. especially when it comes to where needs these sweetness with depth. I wonder if you would change the picture of the main menu and such to make it look fancier XD, and a tip or a suggestion here, things such as "Day xx" could be coded using screen to display the text in the center. Could teach you how to if you want or not knowing how lol. Overall, It's a really fantastic game! Can't wait to see what would happen next and what happen to the MC in the past <3

just saw the new main menu in 0.24, it looks so cuuute!!

Thank you for such a wonderful vn, it's really amazing!!! This is such a cool story and characters(I really love Presodal). I'm waiting for new updates. Thanks for your work ❤️❤️❤️

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can't wait to see more on Darious route? quite a mistery guy heh? :'D

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Could you add Darius's picture?

What do you mean? Where?

Here, does he has art?

He has sprites, but not CGs

Can you post a picture  of a scene where his sprite is?

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You mean this? This is a photo of 0.24, but it's okay

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Oh my! I really really really love this game! It's so lovely! Looking forward to the next update <3

Couldn't say it better myself

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I am really loving this game so far, I'm really lucky I decided to scroll through the other visual novels and was able to find this. Out of all the visual novels I've tried, this really goes up to my top 3.  I'm enjoying playing this just as much as when playing Extraculicular Activities which speaks a lot since that has been going on for 6 years. The art and backgrounds also remind me of EA and Sileo, which makes me like this game even more. This game has a lot of potentials and I'll be waiting for all updates—especially Tiger's.

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Omg thank you jajaja I'm glad you are loving this VN to the point to put it with thise two.

I'll try my best to give everything to everyone, that's a promise

Is the option to eat either the hamburger, french fries with meat, or chicken nuggets on our first dinner with Tiger have any change on the novel later on? Even simple dialog changes.

It's the only thing you'll eat for dinner every time you go to the restaurant with Tiger

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i dont know i this is just me but some of the background imagines didn't load. is there a reason why this is happening to me?

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Because there is backgrounds that don't exist still

He is still working on the game, he obviously hasn't had time to make those backgrounds yet.

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come on!

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Just played one route and it's awesome so far :D 

gonna check the other ones bahaha

Also, dude!, which music is that that plays on Tiger's route when u r on the gym? I loved it bahaha so energetic!

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So, played all routes avaiable so far LOL 

this game is damn good! :D 

just something that made me curious: why the fck I can't skip the text that is repeated across the routes (which I read already read)  without turning on the option of skipping unseen text?

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Because I'm stupid and didn't made those lines in the same file. Every route has a file, so you cannot skip the lines

oooh that LOL bahahaha

well, hope u r able to salvage it on further updates :D 

also, about the music...?

It's from the producer HieNa. You can find him on Soundcloud. The song is called "Hip-Hop Instrumental No.138"

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Found it. 

Hip Hop Instrumental No 138 Sampled Dark Chill Verse Trap Beat Prod HieNa - YouTube

Thanks!


Gonna wait for the next update now xP

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I'm... I'm in love with Marcos holy hell

Who's Marcos?

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o_o ........................................................................................................
Amm, okay? The best friend of YC

Is he a furry? Sorry I haven't had the chance to play through the VN since before the art change.

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No, he is an alien from Secladivus galaxy. But looks like a wolf -3-
(I am joking, not being mean)

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No, no, this is canon now. Long live the Secladivians!

Nooooo!!! I have yet to create a galaxy story with furrys, but not this!!

Really enjoying your game. So for the White Tiger is my favorite. The Tiger is my second favorite followed by the third be Darius. Only one character left to play through

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I'm on the English windows version and the VN crashes early in. Already posted about this, but I figured out the problem :3

The "baño" image is missing. I've just copied the "ba+|o" image and renamed it to baño and the game doesn't crash anymore. I also see there is no "gimnasio_noche" yet there is a "zonaprivada", which I've copied and renamed like the other missing image.

Not sure if there are coding differences between Spanish and English versions or what's happening here :/ anyone else have this problem?

I wanted to talk with you but didn't answer back, I guess. The image "gimnasio_noche" doesn't exist. It's gonna be a different scene, but I don't have it still

At least you got the problem solved. That error is really weird 'cause you're the only one who had it for now.

If there is another error, try to talk to me on Twitter. The best option I got

Hey ^^_ yeah sorry about that, I'm not on any other platform besides Fur Affinity. At least I'm able to finally see the new content~ n_n

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Termine la vn, y no puede esperar mas, así que termine toda la novela en wattpad. Amé la historia.
Espero ver ahora las otras rutas.

i have a question, for the wattpad story is there an english version? i dont know how to translate it

No, there's no English version for the wattpad story. Maybe in the future, but not now

if im not mistaken you can copy paste the words at wattpad right..
so what if, you copy paste it then translate then copy the translated to your notepad or word then read..

That's an option, but have so many mistakes... I can try, but right now would give me problems of time

Hay un versión para Linux? Lo siento pero no quiero cambiar a Windows para jugar eso lol

La versión de PC es compatible con Linux. Si no fuera por tu comentario, no me habría dado cuenta de que no había marcado las plataformas compatibles de cada versión

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Darius and Marcos do be looking fine, shame we will never see them ever again... /j

Thanks for the wonderful novel, i love it

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Hey Pedro~ ^^_ I've been having a problem since version 0.20 where I can't get past day 1ne :/ it happens during the start of the shower scene, an exception occurs every time TwT and I've played past that specific scene on differnt versions before, so I don't know what's happening :s I'm playing the English version and this is the problem:

An exception has occurred.

While loading <'image'u'images/fondos/ba\xf1o.png'>:

File "game/prolog2.rpy", line 19, in script

Scene banio with dissolve

IOError: couldn't find file 'image/fondos/baño.png'.

Please fix this game breaking bug Pedro! QwQ 

Please, can you give me an image on my Discord server? I need to see the problem to fix it. Thanks

Sorry, I'm not on discord "^_^

If you have Twitter, talk with me there and I'll try something

10/10 update, your work is amazing as usual.

OMG you didn't even read the new day jajajaja but thank you!!

Esto va por muy buen camino me gusta todo lo que e leído por el momento es muy bueno y me deja con ganas de querer saber más sobre los personajes y del mismo personaje

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Just finished the current build, the story is good so far :3 altho the english can still be improved and uhhh the character introduction kinda random (i think) i mean presodal,tiger and wolf guy are okay but the other kinda like not natural?????(idkwhatimsayingatthispoint)

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So what species is MC?

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MC is human

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Just played through the available tiger route.  Very nice so far, I love tigers personality, thank you for working on this project.  Looking forward for what's to come!


There were a few things I noticed.  I think some of them were just unfinished assets instead of bugs, but I figured I'd note them anyway just as feedback.

After entering arena after getting past the gorilla, the error message "Image 'gimnasio_noche' not found." appeared and the background was black until entering the locker room.

When Buld and Mantar were supposed to be on screen, the error messages "Image 'buld' not found." and "Image 'mantar' not found." appeared.

After the nightmare, there was a screen of untranslated text.

Wrong '@' punctuation when tiger says to leave gym.

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Buld and Mantar don't have a sprite.

The scene of 'gimnasio_noche' doesn't exist, there's no image still.

The untranslated text it's fixed in the next update.

The last error... Could you give me an image of that error on Discord? Thanks. 

And thanks for the comment and I hope you like the next updates. 

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Decent game so far, the English translation is pretty bad. Do you just use Google Translate for the translation? You should think about getting someone to proofread and translate it properly. 

someone's in there doing it, so don't worry

The translation wasn't that. Its mostly small errors like like using female pronouns for males. Nothing major wrong, but I mean its expected English is a second language for them. So a few mistakes is expected. 


And its nothing that makes the novel unreadable, its mostly minor mistakes here and there.

I found a bug on window when your in your room before you take a shower an errr  you got to fix that I can't go any further because of that errr

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Please, can you say the day of the error? Or an image of the bug, so I can see what happened exactly.

it was the day after I got saved it was the day when my character said something about his pajamas

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If it's a save file that don't load, then the error it's that the line doesn't exist anymore because I was changing some of the script.
I recommend starting from the start and, if the error persist, tell me to search this error.

I don't have anything saved I just started playing it yesterday and that's when the error popped up

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Does it happen again? And if it happens, could you take an image to see? 

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a small question, is it possible to have an option to change species at the very start? Like you can choose between a dog or human

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Sorry, but there's no option to change the specie of the MC.

oooh- I'm gonna imagine gojou satoru as the main character, because i can't imagine a character well 😔😗

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i really like tiger being grumpy all the time, i wonder if we get to see him get overprotective or jealouse- im just imagining him grabbing your arm and pull you away after a guy flirts with you

some sentences are quite difficult to understand, but this is a good game, I think I love it. Although the main charactor me is sometimes annoying, his behavior is naive, I hope he will get his growth someday.

Looking for the next update,thank you for the game.

the MC is the one doing the flirt lol and i like it

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Al fin logré terminar la reciente actualización! Me encantó los sprites! Es bueno al fin de ver a los personajes en vivo a todo color y ver mejoras en la novela visual. keep up the good work! 😁

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Jajajaja gracias por el comentario. Espero que las próximas actualizaciones sigan igual de interesantes que lo que tenemos ahora.

Eh? when will the new update come out?

The next update will be on next month. If it's not next month then I'll try to update ASAP

ooo cant wait

A bug, theres no image for the gym

'cause trere's no image for now. In the future there will be

Character images are quite pretty, and I like this interesting story. However, there are still some grammar mistakes and sometimes it costs me a long time to understand what it means.(maybe because I'm not a native English speaker)Totally, it's a good game, I really hope to see when it's finished. Good work and keep going!

Thanks for your comment
The English translation have grammar mistakes and there's someone fixing it.
I hope you like the next updates of this VN and have a good day

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So far I’m liking the narrative and how simple things are. There are quite some peaks and good mellows in the story which is just the right mix. But there is something that bothers me sometimes and that is the grammar. there are a few that might be simplified for non-native English speakers or can be reconstructed sentences to make it easier to comprehend for the readers. But all in all, its still good. Just a bit of tweaks that’s all. Tho I might have an idea why it might’ve been like this and that is because of localization. Some languages have shorter characters used to express sentences while others are longer which in turn might be pretty difficult to maintain. Keep up the good work!

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Thanks. Sometimes it's difficult to me write it in English, but I have someone who's fixing that right now.

Thanks for your honest comment 😇

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love this vn so far <3

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omg they look goooooood whew

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www…when can the character images be finished …I actually wanna see the handsome guys😔

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In the next update, that will be public the next month December or January. I'll see exactly when.

There's new sprites for all of them

please make more i this is a amazing story

I never stopped. A new update is near. 

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when is the next update??

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I'm working on it, but my studies doesn't give me the time to go fast

Good to know that this game is still alive :D

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