Al fin logré terminar la reciente actualización! Me encantó los sprites! Es bueno al fin de ver a los personajes en vivo a todo color y ver mejoras en la novela visual. keep up the good work! 😁
Character images are quite pretty, and I like this interesting story. However, there are still some grammar mistakes and sometimes it costs me a long time to understand what it means.(maybe because I'm not a native English speaker)Totally, it's a good game, I really hope to see when it's finished. Good work and keep going!
Thanks for your comment The English translation have grammar mistakes and there's someone fixing it. I hope you like the next updates of this VN and have a good day
So far I’m liking the narrative and how simple things are. There are quite some peaks and good mellows in the story which is just the right mix. But there is something that bothers me sometimes and that is the grammar. there are a few that might be simplified for non-native English speakers or can be reconstructed sentences to make it easier to comprehend for the readers. But all in all, its still good. Just a bit of tweaks that’s all. Tho I might have an idea why it might’ve been like this and that is because of localization. Some languages have shorter characters used to express sentences while others are longer which in turn might be pretty difficult to maintain. Keep up the good work!
Me alegra saberlo jejeje Pues esta es la novela visual para aquellos que quieren conocer un distinto final, aunque la historia esté a punto de terminar.
Estaría genial para otros libros de Wattpad tuyos porque también estoy leyendo otros y la verdad creo que merecería la pena hacer una vn de alguno de esos libros :3
I don't mean to criticize，just wanna talk about the feelings after i played this vn(not all the routes,just two of them,Tiger and Darius)
From the point of view of the characters，Tiger K.O. the others with no doubt,an extra day story help his sharp personality stand out. And some others are just like, we met，oh, I'll invite you for something. That's kinda weird……
And the dialogue is a little……idealistic？At least for me. I felt that from Darius route,when i saw the conversation between MC and Darius in the cafe,i was like:what??? But this vn has great potential, i hope it to be better and it has the potential to be.
(I'm really sorry if I'm being mean, just wanna give you some feedback, or maybe you don't want it… Hope i won't bother you or something. And please forget about my bad grammar and words,I'm a Chinese after all，i tried.)
Don't worry, your feedback is great. Sorry for my bad English too, I'm Spanish, so...
And yeah, I know what you mean with the idealistic dialogue. I'll change everything in the future, all the initial days of the other routes, not Tiger's, of course he's perfect. Well... I'm changing the last day of Tiger, but ok...
Thanks again for your opinion and I'll try my best in the future ^^
I'm glad that my feedback is helpful. And i really appreciate that you decide to change, it's not easy seems you've written it. I won't force you so, take your time, it always takes time to do something. I believe you'll solve the problem you're facing. And i sincerely hope your vn will be better and better♥
Going to need someone to go over the English files, translation programs between also any language and English, the proper erbs don't translate well. Happens to end up being a verb that doesn't sound proper, or wrong tense of the verb. Not urgent though since the rough translation can be understood well enough.
I downloaded it earlier and I only have this two characters, I tried downloading it again but it doesn't show up (Idk why, but I can't add pics, I only have "Presodal" "Tiger" and "fondos")
awesome. I’d give it a shot. Basically what I can do is do a play through, and point out better grammar and spelling etc. I know a bit of Spanish myself. But I don’t mind.
No hace falta que te metas en la historia de Wattpad. Esta VN se centra en él de principio a fin, dándome la oportunidad de reescribir lo que no me gustó, así que puedes dejar Wattpad a un lado jajaja
Yo sigo la historia y a ti desde los primeros capítulos (como en el 8° o 9° Capitulo mas menos) en WattPad pero por problemas de la cuenta de que mi correo estaba desactualizado y mas cosas, ya no pude seguirla desde el capitulo 49, no tuve un lugar en resolver ese problema hasta hace como una semana, pero igualmente ya no pude ver las actualizaciones del libro y llegue hasta aquí porque estuve buscando imágenes de novelas furry ya que estoy construyendo un pagina web (parte de mis trabajos de mi carrera), encuentro la portada y dije "como", entro y veo que eres tu y la historia, ahí me quede anonadado.
Neta sigue así y si tengo la posibilidad de apoyarte en Patreon o aquí lo hare y también voy a empezar a actualizarme en la historia que ya por fin empiezo a tener mas tiempo libre. Enhorabuena por tu trabajo <3
Madre mía, Wattpad te ha pegado igual de fuerte que a mí. Siento que no pudieras seguir las actualizaciones. Y gracias por tu apoyo, me alegra ver que he sido redescubierto y que te gusta mi trabajo. Lo intento con todas mis ganas y espero que siga siendo igual de bueno o mejor. Por apoyar hay varias formas, y te lo agradezco de nuevo.
No sé si cuente como error, pero en android aparece "image 'darius' not found" e "image 'marcos' not found". Tal vez no se hayan incorporado aún teniendo en cuenta la traducción, pero qué sé yo.
Como se puede esperar, esta NV es nueva y los sprites son mínimos, por lo que ese mensaje es de lo más normal. Hay un montón de cosas que se incorporarán en el futuro. Gracias por tu comentario y espero que lo sigas apoyando.
Quizá esta actualización haya sido un poquito corta, pero la he disfrutado muchísimo, me encanta Darius y me muero de ganas de saber mas de el :) (y de ponerle cara también)
A mí también me gustaría ponerle cara, pero parece que no a todo el mundo le ha gustado el nuevo sprite de Tiger y me da miedo que acabe perdiendo atención de todos. Tendría que buscar un nuevo artista, aunque tenga que pagar.
Es que Kyle ha dejado el nivel bastante alto... su Tiger era muy guapo y atractivo... y esa mirada enfadada pero muy sexy ❤️
El nuevo Sprite de Tiger... la diferencia de habilidad es bastante grande... y creo que una de las cosas que nos ha chocado a todos es ver primero el Tiger de Kyle en tu twitter y de repente.... el de el artista nuevo... Espero de verdad no estar ofendiendote. Esta crítica te la estoy diciendo más en plan amigo (aunque no nos conozcamos de nada) para ver si sirve de algo para que puedas corregirlo lo mejor posible. Aunque no es asunto mío quiero y deseo lo mejor para esta novela visual
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Al fin logré terminar la reciente actualización! Me encantó los sprites! Es bueno al fin de ver a los personajes en vivo a todo color y ver mejoras en la novela visual. keep up the good work! 😁
Jajajaja gracias por el comentario. Espero que las próximas actualizaciones sigan igual de interesantes que lo que tenemos ahora.
Eh? when will the new update come out?
The next update will be on next month. If it's not next month then I'll try to update ASAP
ooo cant wait
A bug, theres no image for the gym
'cause trere's no image for now. In the future there will be
Character images are quite pretty, and I like this interesting story. However, there are still some grammar mistakes and sometimes it costs me a long time to understand what it means.(maybe because I'm not a native English speaker)Totally, it's a good game, I really hope to see when it's finished. Good work and keep going!
Thanks for your comment
The English translation have grammar mistakes and there's someone fixing it.
I hope you like the next updates of this VN and have a good day
So far I’m liking the narrative and how simple things are. There are quite some peaks and good mellows in the story which is just the right mix. But there is something that bothers me sometimes and that is the grammar. there are a few that might be simplified for non-native English speakers or can be reconstructed sentences to make it easier to comprehend for the readers. But all in all, its still good. Just a bit of tweaks that’s all. Tho I might have an idea why it might’ve been like this and that is because of localization. Some languages have shorter characters used to express sentences while others are longer which in turn might be pretty difficult to maintain. Keep up the good work!
Thanks. Sometimes it's difficult to me write it in English, but I have someone who's fixing that right now.
Thanks for your honest comment 😇
love this vn so far <3
omg they look goooooood whew
www…when can the character images be finished …I actually wanna see the handsome guys😔
In the next update, that will be public the next month December or January. I'll see exactly when.
There's new sprites for all of them
please make more i this is a amazing story
I never stopped. A new update is near.
when is the next update??
I'm working on it, but my studies doesn't give me the time to go fast
Good to know that this game is still alive :D
Al fin una novela en español :D
Sí, verdad?
no mames hay una novela visual de tigre boxeador que pedo xdd
Sí, lo hay y está en desarrollo, aunque me pregunto si eres un fan de la novela
por supuesto!!, Recientemente encontré la historia en Wattpad y llevo como 2 semanas leyendola y ya soy fan c:
Me alegra saberlo jejeje
Pues esta es la novela visual para aquellos que quieren conocer un distinto final, aunque la historia esté a punto de terminar.
Estaría genial para otros libros de Wattpad tuyos porque también estoy leyendo otros y la verdad creo que merecería la pena hacer una vn de alguno de esos libros :3
Hola como estas ?, Me gusta mucho tu visual novel, pregunta que dia será la próxima actualización ? saludos
Suelo actualizar la segunda mitad del mes, pero debido a mis estudios, apenas tengo tiempo para escribir y prepararlo todo.
Igual gracias por tu interés y espero actualizar lo más pronto posible.
I played I game just like This. It's just different characters now
I loved the update!
I don't mean to criticize，just wanna talk about the feelings after i played this vn(not all the routes,just two of them,Tiger and Darius)
From the point of view of the characters，Tiger K.O. the others with no doubt,an extra day story help his sharp personality stand out. And some others are just like, we met，oh, I'll invite you for something. That's kinda weird……
And the dialogue is a little……idealistic？At least for me. I felt that from Darius route,when i saw the conversation between MC and Darius in the cafe,i was like:what??? But this vn has great potential, i hope it to be better and it has the potential to be.
(I'm really sorry if I'm being mean, just wanna give you some feedback, or maybe you don't want it… Hope i won't bother you or something. And please forget about my bad grammar and words,I'm a Chinese after all，i tried.)
Don't worry, your feedback is great. Sorry for my bad English too, I'm Spanish, so...
And yeah, I know what you mean with the idealistic dialogue. I'll change everything in the future, all the initial days of the other routes, not Tiger's, of course he's perfect. Well... I'm changing the last day of Tiger, but ok...
Thanks again for your opinion and I'll try my best in the future ^^
I'm glad that my feedback is helpful. And i really appreciate that you decide to change, it's not easy seems you've written it. I won't force you so, take your time, it always takes time to do something. I believe you'll solve the problem you're facing. And i sincerely hope your vn will be better and better♥
Jejeje Thanks for your comment. Hope you have a great day and, like I said before, I'll try my best with all, problems included xD
It's really nothing,just doing what a player can do~
I thought i could date with Buld,but it seems like a no…It doesn't matter,i prefer Tiger anyway.
Maybe in the future, you can date him... Who knows?
I'm looking forward to it
yeah, I did a discord server
Of course, you can find it just clicking the Discord word in the text of the page of this game
There's alot of image's not found in the game why that
Because there's no sprites
I may not have the best Spanish vocabulary but I could always help out with proof reading if you guys ever need the help! 😄
I can see some grammatical errors in the English, so I definitely would also be happy to help where I can!
I see... You can help whatever you want with the English translation.
Going to need someone to go over the English files, translation programs between also any language and English, the proper erbs don't translate well. Happens to end up being a verb that doesn't sound proper, or wrong tense of the verb. Not urgent though since the rough translation can be understood well enough.
I need help with that, I recognize it
Woah Marcos is invisble
Woah, Marcos doesn't have any sprite xD
dammm i mean even tho he hss no sprite he looks dazaling lol
Jajajaja yeah i got it xD
i wonder though what will he actually look
like
Like a dragon 🐲
Just use you imagination 😃 lol
Why hasn't the game been updated in a while
I had problems with my Internet and my studies. I'm trying to update earlier asap. Sorry for the inconvenients.
Its k I just hadn't played the game in a while so I got worried. Also amazing art for the 2 characters of now. Really stunning
Do you think there is any place where you at least show the design of the characters that do not have sprites so that I can at least imagine them?
Of course. I can share a file that have the details of all characters.
But there's no spritea, of course.
I downloaded it earlier and I only have this two characters, I tried downloading it again but it doesn't show up (Idk why, but I can't add pics, I only have "Presodal" "Tiger" and "fondos")
There's no more sprites. Don't worry. There is gonna be more if we wait... I hope
nsfw??
Not for now
But the translator will help😼
But I don't know if it's correct what I'm typing. I don't trust so much.
Translator is a mess
Yeah, I know.
why are such cool games not in Russian😭
Because I don't know Russian
I know Russian. Don't know Spanish, but it sounds cool
Would you like someone to proof read it in English? It could improve the English translation.
I don't have someone to read it in English. That could be great.
awesome. I’d give it a shot. Basically what I can do is do a play through, and point out better grammar and spelling etc. I know a bit of Spanish myself. But I don’t mind.
IDK about that... But if you want to try, do it. I'm not gonna stop you ^^'
awesome! It does have so much potential! A start would be sometimes when it says her when it means him.
If you want, you can join my discord server and talk there
NEW UPDATE!
YEAH!!! NEW UPDATE!!!!
s there any nsfw content
There will be
No hace falta que te metas en la historia de Wattpad. Esta VN se centra en él de principio a fin, dándome la oportunidad de reescribir lo que no me gustó, así que puedes dejar Wattpad a un lado jajaja
Hey why theres no image on some backround and characters?
Because there's no sprites and backgrounds. I'm literally new in VNs and my new artist is trying to finish the new sprites.
okey
YES! A NEW UPDATE!
YES!! BUT WITHOUT A SPRITE!!! :'''''''''D (i want to die)
hey all the images are not showing apart from crimson tusk and presodal
Because they don't have sprites.
Aquí mucho texto pero muy nostálgico
Yo sigo la historia y a ti desde los primeros capítulos (como en el 8° o 9° Capitulo mas menos) en WattPad pero por problemas de la cuenta de que mi correo estaba desactualizado y mas cosas, ya no pude seguirla desde el capitulo 49, no tuve un lugar en resolver ese problema hasta hace como una semana, pero igualmente ya no pude ver las actualizaciones del libro y llegue hasta aquí porque estuve buscando imágenes de novelas furry ya que estoy construyendo un pagina web (parte de mis trabajos de mi carrera), encuentro la portada y dije "como", entro y veo que eres tu y la historia, ahí me quede anonadado.
Neta sigue así y si tengo la posibilidad de apoyarte en Patreon o aquí lo hare y también voy a empezar a actualizarme en la historia que ya por fin empiezo a tener mas tiempo libre. Enhorabuena por tu trabajo <3
Madre mía, Wattpad te ha pegado igual de fuerte que a mí. Siento que no pudieras seguir las actualizaciones.
Y gracias por tu apoyo, me alegra ver que he sido redescubierto y que te gusta mi trabajo. Lo intento con todas mis ganas y espero que siga siendo igual de bueno o mejor.
Por apoyar hay varias formas, y te lo agradezco de nuevo.
No sé si cuente como error, pero en android aparece "image 'darius' not found" e "image 'marcos' not found". Tal vez no se hayan incorporado aún teniendo en cuenta la traducción, pero qué sé yo.
Dejando de lado eso. Me encanta esta NV.
Sigue así.
Como se puede esperar, esta NV es nueva y los sprites son mínimos, por lo que ese mensaje es de lo más normal. Hay un montón de cosas que se incorporarán en el futuro. Gracias por tu comentario y espero que lo sigas apoyando.
New art significantly worse than old art
I know. There's gonna be a new artist, like I published in Patreon. This artist is much better, so don't worry.
Quizá esta actualización haya sido un poquito corta, pero la he disfrutado muchísimo, me encanta Darius y me muero de ganas de saber mas de el :) (y de ponerle cara también)
A mí también me gustaría ponerle cara, pero parece que no a todo el mundo le ha gustado el nuevo sprite de Tiger y me da miedo que acabe perdiendo atención de todos. Tendría que buscar un nuevo artista, aunque tenga que pagar.
Es que Kyle ha dejado el nivel bastante alto... su Tiger era muy guapo y atractivo... y esa mirada enfadada pero muy sexy ❤️
El nuevo Sprite de Tiger... la diferencia de habilidad es bastante grande... y creo que una de las cosas que nos ha chocado a todos es ver primero el Tiger de Kyle en tu twitter y de repente.... el de el artista nuevo... Espero de verdad no estar ofendiendote. Esta crítica te la estoy diciendo más en plan amigo (aunque no nos conozcamos de nada) para ver si sirve de algo para que puedas corregirlo lo mejor posible. Aunque no es asunto mío quiero y deseo lo mejor para esta novela visual
I like the new art of the tiger better, he doesn't look so thin. Kudos to you! :)
Me gusta el arte nuevo de Tiger, no se vé tan escuálido (flaco) como antes, un cuerpo un poco más grande se vé mejor en él. Kudos! :)