if im not mistaken you can copy paste the words at wattpad right.. so what if, you copy paste it then translate then copy the translated to your notepad or word then read..
La versión de PC es compatible con Linux. Si no fuera por tu comentario, no me habría dado cuenta de que no había marcado las plataformas compatibles de cada versión
Hey Pedro~ ^^_ I've been having a problem since version 0.20 where I can't get past day 1ne :/ it happens during the start of the shower scene, an exception occurs every time TwT and I've played past that specific scene on differnt versions before, so I don't know what's happening :s I'm playing the English version and this is the problem:
An exception has occurred.
While loading <'image'u'images/fondos/ba\xf1o.png'>:
Esto va por muy buen camino me gusta todo lo que e leído por el momento es muy bueno y me deja con ganas de querer saber más sobre los personajes y del mismo personaje
Just finished the current build, the story is good so far :3 altho the english can still be improved and uhhh the character introduction kinda random (i think) i mean presodal,tiger and wolf guy are okay but the other kinda like not natural?????(idkwhatimsayingatthispoint)
Just played through the available tiger route. Very nice so far, I love tigers personality, thank you for working on this project. Looking forward for what's to come!
There were a few things I noticed. I think some of them were just unfinished assets instead of bugs, but I figured I'd note them anyway just as feedback.
After entering arena after getting past the gorilla, the error message "Image 'gimnasio_noche' not found." appeared and the background was black until entering the locker room.
When Buld and Mantar were supposed to be on screen, the error messages "Image 'buld' not found." and "Image 'mantar' not found." appeared.
After the nightmare, there was a screen of untranslated text.
Wrong '@' punctuation when tiger says to leave gym.
Decent game so far, the English translation is pretty bad. Do you just use Google Translate for the translation? You should think about getting someone to proofread and translate it properly.
The translation wasn't that. Its mostly small errors like like using female pronouns for males. Nothing major wrong, but I mean its expected English is a second language for them. So a few mistakes is expected.
And its nothing that makes the novel unreadable, its mostly minor mistakes here and there.
If it's a save file that don't load, then the error it's that the line doesn't exist anymore because I was changing some of the script. I recommend starting from the start and, if the error persist, tell me to search this error.
i really like tiger being grumpy all the time, i wonder if we get to see him get overprotective or jealouse- im just imagining him grabbing your arm and pull you away after a guy flirts with you
some sentences are quite difficult to understand, but this is a good game, I think I love it. Although the main charactor me is sometimes annoying, his behavior is naive, I hope he will get his growth someday.
Looking for the next update,thank you for the game.
Al fin logré terminar la reciente actualización! Me encantó los sprites! Es bueno al fin de ver a los personajes en vivo a todo color y ver mejoras en la novela visual. keep up the good work! 😁
Character images are quite pretty, and I like this interesting story. However, there are still some grammar mistakes and sometimes it costs me a long time to understand what it means.(maybe because I'm not a native English speaker)Totally, it's a good game, I really hope to see when it's finished. Good work and keep going!
Thanks for your comment The English translation have grammar mistakes and there's someone fixing it. I hope you like the next updates of this VN and have a good day
So far I’m liking the narrative and how simple things are. There are quite some peaks and good mellows in the story which is just the right mix. But there is something that bothers me sometimes and that is the grammar. there are a few that might be simplified for non-native English speakers or can be reconstructed sentences to make it easier to comprehend for the readers. But all in all, its still good. Just a bit of tweaks that’s all. Tho I might have an idea why it might’ve been like this and that is because of localization. Some languages have shorter characters used to express sentences while others are longer which in turn might be pretty difficult to maintain. Keep up the good work!
Me alegra saberlo jejeje Pues esta es la novela visual para aquellos que quieren conocer un distinto final, aunque la historia esté a punto de terminar.
Estaría genial para otros libros de Wattpad tuyos porque también estoy leyendo otros y la verdad creo que merecería la pena hacer una vn de alguno de esos libros :3
I don't mean to criticize，just wanna talk about the feelings after i played this vn(not all the routes,just two of them,Tiger and Darius)
From the point of view of the characters，Tiger K.O. the others with no doubt,an extra day story help his sharp personality stand out. And some others are just like, we met，oh, I'll invite you for something. That's kinda weird……
And the dialogue is a little……idealistic？At least for me. I felt that from Darius route,when i saw the conversation between MC and Darius in the cafe,i was like:what??? But this vn has great potential, i hope it to be better and it has the potential to be.
(I'm really sorry if I'm being mean, just wanna give you some feedback, or maybe you don't want it… Hope i won't bother you or something. And please forget about my bad grammar and words,I'm a Chinese after all，i tried.)
Don't worry, your feedback is great. Sorry for my bad English too, I'm Spanish, so...
And yeah, I know what you mean with the idealistic dialogue. I'll change everything in the future, all the initial days of the other routes, not Tiger's, of course he's perfect. Well... I'm changing the last day of Tiger, but ok...
Thanks again for your opinion and I'll try my best in the future ^^
I'm glad that my feedback is helpful. And i really appreciate that you decide to change, it's not easy seems you've written it. I won't force you so, take your time, it always takes time to do something. I believe you'll solve the problem you're facing. And i sincerely hope your vn will be better and better♥
Going to need someone to go over the English files, translation programs between also any language and English, the proper erbs don't translate well. Happens to end up being a verb that doesn't sound proper, or wrong tense of the verb. Not urgent though since the rough translation can be understood well enough.
I downloaded it earlier and I only have this two characters, I tried downloading it again but it doesn't show up (Idk why, but I can't add pics, I only have "Presodal" "Tiger" and "fondos")
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i have a question, for the wattpad story is there an english version? i dont know how to translate it
No, there's no English version for the wattpad story. Maybe in the future, but not now
if im not mistaken you can copy paste the words at wattpad right..
so what if, you copy paste it then translate then copy the translated to your notepad or word then read..
That's an option, but have so many mistakes... I can try, but right now would give me problems of time
Hay un versión para Linux? Lo siento pero no quiero cambiar a Windows para jugar eso lol
La versión de PC es compatible con Linux. Si no fuera por tu comentario, no me habría dado cuenta de que no había marcado las plataformas compatibles de cada versión
Darius and Marcos do be looking fine, shame we will never see them ever again... /j
Thanks for the wonderful novel, i love it
Hey Pedro~ ^^_ I've been having a problem since version 0.20 where I can't get past day 1ne :/ it happens during the start of the shower scene, an exception occurs every time TwT and I've played past that specific scene on differnt versions before, so I don't know what's happening :s I'm playing the English version and this is the problem:
An exception has occurred.
While loading <'image'u'images/fondos/ba\xf1o.png'>:
File "game/prolog2.rpy", line 19, in script
Scene banio with dissolve
IOError: couldn't find file 'image/fondos/baño.png'.
Please fix this game breaking bug Pedro! QwQ
Please, can you give me an image on my Discord server? I need to see the problem to fix it. Thanks
Sorry, I'm not on discord "^_^
If you have Twitter, talk with me there and I'll try something
10/10 update, your work is amazing as usual.
OMG you didn't even read the new day jajajaja but thank you!!
Esto va por muy buen camino me gusta todo lo que e leído por el momento es muy bueno y me deja con ganas de querer saber más sobre los personajes y del mismo personaje
Just finished the current build, the story is good so far :3 altho the english can still be improved and uhhh the character introduction kinda random (i think) i mean presodal,tiger and wolf guy are okay but the other kinda like not natural?????(idkwhatimsayingatthispoint)
So what species is MC?
MC is human
Just played through the available tiger route. Very nice so far, I love tigers personality, thank you for working on this project. Looking forward for what's to come!
There were a few things I noticed. I think some of them were just unfinished assets instead of bugs, but I figured I'd note them anyway just as feedback.
After entering arena after getting past the gorilla, the error message "Image 'gimnasio_noche' not found." appeared and the background was black until entering the locker room.
When Buld and Mantar were supposed to be on screen, the error messages "Image 'buld' not found." and "Image 'mantar' not found." appeared.
After the nightmare, there was a screen of untranslated text.
Wrong '@' punctuation when tiger says to leave gym.
Buld and Mantar don't have a sprite.
The scene of 'gimnasio_noche' doesn't exist, there's no image still.
The untranslated text it's fixed in the next update.
The last error... Could you give me an image of that error on Discord? Thanks.
And thanks for the comment and I hope you like the next updates.
Decent game so far, the English translation is pretty bad. Do you just use Google Translate for the translation? You should think about getting someone to proofread and translate it properly.
someone's in there doing it, so don't worry
The translation wasn't that. Its mostly small errors like like using female pronouns for males. Nothing major wrong, but I mean its expected English is a second language for them. So a few mistakes is expected.
And its nothing that makes the novel unreadable, its mostly minor mistakes here and there.
I found a bug on window when your in your room before you take a shower an errr you got to fix that I can't go any further because of that errr
Please, can you say the day of the error? Or an image of the bug, so I can see what happened exactly.
it was the day after I got saved it was the day when my character said something about his pajamas
If it's a save file that don't load, then the error it's that the line doesn't exist anymore because I was changing some of the script.
I recommend starting from the start and, if the error persist, tell me to search this error.
I don't have anything saved I just started playing it yesterday and that's when the error popped up
Does it happen again? And if it happens, could you take an image to see?
a small question, is it possible to have an option to change species at the very start? Like you can choose between a dog or human
Sorry, but there's no option to change the specie of the MC.
oooh- I'm gonna imagine gojou satoru as the main character, because i can't imagine a character well 😔😗
i really like tiger being grumpy all the time, i wonder if we get to see him get overprotective or jealouse- im just imagining him grabbing your arm and pull you away after a guy flirts with you
some sentences are quite difficult to understand, but this is a good game, I think I love it. Although the main charactor me is sometimes annoying, his behavior is naive, I hope he will get his growth someday.
Looking for the next update,thank you for the game.
the MC is the one doing the flirt lol and i like it
Al fin logré terminar la reciente actualización! Me encantó los sprites! Es bueno al fin de ver a los personajes en vivo a todo color y ver mejoras en la novela visual. keep up the good work! 😁
Jajajaja gracias por el comentario. Espero que las próximas actualizaciones sigan igual de interesantes que lo que tenemos ahora.
Eh? when will the new update come out?
The next update will be on next month. If it's not next month then I'll try to update ASAP
ooo cant wait
A bug, theres no image for the gym
'cause trere's no image for now. In the future there will be
Character images are quite pretty, and I like this interesting story. However, there are still some grammar mistakes and sometimes it costs me a long time to understand what it means.(maybe because I'm not a native English speaker)Totally, it's a good game, I really hope to see when it's finished. Good work and keep going!
Thanks for your comment
The English translation have grammar mistakes and there's someone fixing it.
I hope you like the next updates of this VN and have a good day
So far I’m liking the narrative and how simple things are. There are quite some peaks and good mellows in the story which is just the right mix. But there is something that bothers me sometimes and that is the grammar. there are a few that might be simplified for non-native English speakers or can be reconstructed sentences to make it easier to comprehend for the readers. But all in all, its still good. Just a bit of tweaks that’s all. Tho I might have an idea why it might’ve been like this and that is because of localization. Some languages have shorter characters used to express sentences while others are longer which in turn might be pretty difficult to maintain. Keep up the good work!
Thanks. Sometimes it's difficult to me write it in English, but I have someone who's fixing that right now.
Thanks for your honest comment 😇
love this vn so far <3
omg they look goooooood whew
www…when can the character images be finished …I actually wanna see the handsome guys😔
In the next update, that will be public the next month December or January. I'll see exactly when.
There's new sprites for all of them
please make more i this is a amazing story
I never stopped. A new update is near.
when is the next update??
I'm working on it, but my studies doesn't give me the time to go fast
Good to know that this game is still alive :D
Al fin una novela en español :D
Sí, verdad?
no mames hay una novela visual de tigre boxeador que pedo xdd
Sí, lo hay y está en desarrollo, aunque me pregunto si eres un fan de la novela
por supuesto!!, Recientemente encontré la historia en Wattpad y llevo como 2 semanas leyendola y ya soy fan c:
Me alegra saberlo jejeje
Pues esta es la novela visual para aquellos que quieren conocer un distinto final, aunque la historia esté a punto de terminar.
Estaría genial para otros libros de Wattpad tuyos porque también estoy leyendo otros y la verdad creo que merecería la pena hacer una vn de alguno de esos libros :3
Hola como estas ?, Me gusta mucho tu visual novel, pregunta que dia será la próxima actualización ? saludos
Suelo actualizar la segunda mitad del mes, pero debido a mis estudios, apenas tengo tiempo para escribir y prepararlo todo.
Igual gracias por tu interés y espero actualizar lo más pronto posible.
I played I game just like This. It's just different characters now
I loved the update!
I don't mean to criticize，just wanna talk about the feelings after i played this vn(not all the routes,just two of them,Tiger and Darius)
From the point of view of the characters，Tiger K.O. the others with no doubt,an extra day story help his sharp personality stand out. And some others are just like, we met，oh, I'll invite you for something. That's kinda weird……
And the dialogue is a little……idealistic？At least for me. I felt that from Darius route,when i saw the conversation between MC and Darius in the cafe,i was like:what??? But this vn has great potential, i hope it to be better and it has the potential to be.
(I'm really sorry if I'm being mean, just wanna give you some feedback, or maybe you don't want it… Hope i won't bother you or something. And please forget about my bad grammar and words,I'm a Chinese after all，i tried.)
Don't worry, your feedback is great. Sorry for my bad English too, I'm Spanish, so...
And yeah, I know what you mean with the idealistic dialogue. I'll change everything in the future, all the initial days of the other routes, not Tiger's, of course he's perfect. Well... I'm changing the last day of Tiger, but ok...
Thanks again for your opinion and I'll try my best in the future ^^
I'm glad that my feedback is helpful. And i really appreciate that you decide to change, it's not easy seems you've written it. I won't force you so, take your time, it always takes time to do something. I believe you'll solve the problem you're facing. And i sincerely hope your vn will be better and better♥
Jejeje Thanks for your comment. Hope you have a great day and, like I said before, I'll try my best with all, problems included xD
It's really nothing,just doing what a player can do~
I thought i could date with Buld,but it seems like a no…It doesn't matter,i prefer Tiger anyway.
Maybe in the future, you can date him... Who knows?
I'm looking forward to it
yeah, I did a discord server
Of course, you can find it just clicking the Discord word in the text of the page of this game
There's alot of image's not found in the game why that
Because there's no sprites
I may not have the best Spanish vocabulary but I could always help out with proof reading if you guys ever need the help! 😄
I can see some grammatical errors in the English, so I definitely would also be happy to help where I can!
I see... You can help whatever you want with the English translation.
Going to need someone to go over the English files, translation programs between also any language and English, the proper erbs don't translate well. Happens to end up being a verb that doesn't sound proper, or wrong tense of the verb. Not urgent though since the rough translation can be understood well enough.
I need help with that, I recognize it
Woah Marcos is invisble
Woah, Marcos doesn't have any sprite xD
dammm i mean even tho he hss no sprite he looks dazaling lol
Jajajaja yeah i got it xD
i wonder though what will he actually look
like
Like a dragon 🐲
Just use you imagination 😃 lol
Why hasn't the game been updated in a while
I had problems with my Internet and my studies. I'm trying to update earlier asap. Sorry for the inconvenients.
Its k I just hadn't played the game in a while so I got worried. Also amazing art for the 2 characters of now. Really stunning
Do you think there is any place where you at least show the design of the characters that do not have sprites so that I can at least imagine them?
Of course. I can share a file that have the details of all characters.
But there's no spritea, of course.
I downloaded it earlier and I only have this two characters, I tried downloading it again but it doesn't show up (Idk why, but I can't add pics, I only have "Presodal" "Tiger" and "fondos")
There's no more sprites. Don't worry. There is gonna be more if we wait... I hope